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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Change A thinker with a tinker’s pen Still writing links of now and then And playing all of who am I Those bouncing balls of echoes cry They rebound in the dark of night Fireflies that wink in light Soundless in the winds that blow They seem to print that I don’t know Which only makes me roar the more? A spirit caged in earthly core Locked in gravity held in air Is almost more than I can bear I havoc in the force of change With no defense I can arrange It burns my wick into an ash And weighs me down in sands of cache I only know I’ll turn to dust That force of change for readjust |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You write well of the inevitable, Sy  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Your writing makes me feel complete in some way -- it's like I feel the words as I read. I love that. A |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
This flows like water. Great rhyme and steady meter. Enjoyed. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Your rhymes are exquisite, your thoughts profound. And thank you, Sy, for reading and gently replying to one of my writes earlier. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
your words are so real so forceful Sir Sy... "spirit caged in earthly core" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper I can only give my humble thanks. aziza You are kind, I thank you. Steve I enjoyed your writing, glad you enjoyed mine. Midnitesun Since we are members of the same lot Why would I not? Lady Perhaps that should be " Spirit caged in earthly roar." Thank you sweet Lady. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh dear, there is that awful word "Change", again. I kind of like things like they are. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick May your days be a pantomime of love and peace.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Yessss! I know of such moments, when there is this yearning to be reunited to the Absolute. Amazing write, dear Seymour! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You are a love, thank you. |
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