Open Poetry #39 |
The Villanelle Challenge |
aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
My fingers snarled in the keys Mind mulling over artistic thought Untangling confusion into poetry A suggestion offered teasingly I settle down to give it my best shot My fingers snarled in the keys The attempt is driving me crazy Writing Villanelle isn’t thrilling me a lot Untangling confusion into poetry It could be that my mind is lazy But mind and attention are truly caught My fingers snarled in the keys Words lose any hint of subtly My grasp has lost any sense of poetic plot Untangling confusion into poetry Please put me out of my misery Tequila can do it with just one more shot My fingers snarled in the keys Untangling confusion into poetry aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
lol I love your spirit aziza here's your tequila... you did well |
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