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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-11-05 12:27 PM


My fingers snarled in the keys
Mind mulling over artistic thought
Untangling confusion into poetry

A suggestion offered teasingly
I settle down to give it my best shot
My fingers snarled in the keys

The attempt is driving me crazy
Writing Villanelle isn’t thrilling me a lot
Untangling confusion into poetry

It could be that my mind is lazy
But mind and attention are truly caught
My fingers snarled in the keys

Words lose any hint of subtly
My grasp has lost any sense of poetic plot
Untangling confusion into poetry

Please put me out of my misery
Tequila can do it with just one more shot
My fingers snarled in the keys
Untangling confusion into poetry

aziza

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Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
1 posted 2006-11-05 01:50 AM



lol

I love your spirit aziza

here's your tequila...
you did well


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