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Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

0 posted 2006-11-02 06:49 PM

There's chaos in my mind
Words, playing hide and seek
Until I touch them one by one
I close my eyes
And silence fill the gaps
Which are growing wider and wider

They're all gone

The words I've touched
Won't play
Not today

Maybe tomorrow, they say

And I feel empty
Like I've lost someone I loved
They won't play
Not today they say
Leaving me with an ink filled pen
Hanging over white paper

A little breeze
Has wiped my head clean

And I will rest my soul
Until chaos comes back again

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-02 09:47 PM

perfectly described!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-11-02 09:56 PM

Yes, Titia...

these are the moments
I've shared with you lately,
even though we did not
share them in word...

we shared them in soul...

Hope you are recuperating and
recovering quickly!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2006-11-03 12:07 PM

Awwww Titia, I know just how you feel. Hope you are doing well, and recuperating nicely.
Here's a Big Knuffle for you.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

4 posted 2006-11-03 01:31 PM

Love the touch of your words darling Dutchie, Keth says rest in peace lovely lady. Sending you hugs and knuffles back
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy
x x x
and Keth says Hi

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2006-11-03 02:16 PM

TitiaLove~

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~Chaos
ink unblocking
thoughts running through your head
You have to grab them, slamming them
into your quilling and welling of ink
Bop 'em over the head, now gal
from you they'll not escape
drip to the page
Chaos~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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arbpoet
Junior Member

since 2006-11-22

Posts 38

6 posted 2006-11-25 03:16 AM

I have felt like this sometimes. Many times I have sat down with my writing tablet and sat down for a hour, thinking. I then had to put my writing tablet away when no thoughts came. Good poem!

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