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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2006-11-22 09:34 AM

My mind's eyes follow your gaze
into darkest midnight’s soulful skies.
Why is it time stands still as I think of you?
The great dipper hangs suspended above us,
on different yet parallel planes,
much as my thoughts do while
you point to celestial bodies,
names slipping from your tongue with such ease,
as if they were intimate friends.
A golden smiling Moon acknowledges your essence
in ways I never knew possible.
Shadows follow you more closely than most,
under the fullness of the glowing moon.
Crickets sing more vibrantly;
yonder barn owl winks in recognition,
lofty thoughts winging in the crisp night air.

"Step softly over the stones," you whisper.
"Do not let your footfall disturb the movement
of the scurrying lizards."

Soft mournful loon cries greet me
from a nearby reflecting lake,
echoing deeply my throat's cry.
Rhythms of nature blending
heartbeats of the ancients
fill the night air with acceptance
of the continual rites of love’s passage,
an unfolding of the essence of life.

Wrapped in anticipation,
cloaked in a passionate resolve
to make every moment count,
I lift my face to receive
the warm moist breath of life.

Shooting stars surround us
as we fall upon soft grasses,
enfolded within each other's arms.
The stroke of you upon my spirit
awakens sleeping passions,
far too long hidden
'neath layers
of self-imposed exile.

to be continued...

Pressie
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 157
Oklahoma

1 posted 2006-11-22 09:46 AM

"Soft mournful loon cries greet me
from a nearby reflecting lake,
echoing deeply my throat's cry.
Rhythms of nature blending
heartbeats of the ancients
fill the night air with acceptance
of the continual rites of love’s passage,
an unfolding of the essence of life."

This is some really good write Midnitesun.

More ......more!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-11-22 09:51 AM

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh, Kacy....

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-11-22 02:38 PM

those loons
sigh...
truly beautiful Kacy

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-11-22 02:48 PM

Beautiful Kacy..I look forward to the continuation.
Have a Happy Thanksgiving.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-11-23 09:39 AM

thanking each of you! for replying to this one

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2006-11-23 11:43 AM

enjoyed

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-11-23 11:59 AM

A golden smiling Moon acknowledges your essence
in ways I never knew possible.
Shadows follow you more closely than most,
under the fullness of the glowing moon.
Crickets sing more vibrantly;
yonder barn owl winks in recognition,
lofty thoughts winging in the crisp night air.

~*~

This is a spirited soul
that I would love to know...

Happy Thanksgiving, Kacy!

Am looking forward to this particular
"feast" for the eyes to continue...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2006-11-23 12:33 PM

Thank you Vandana, and Karilea.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2006-11-23 01:18 PM

Mercy that is lovely Kacy, and will be looking for the continuation for sure. I have not had time to be here what with life, and a new puppy, but all is good! Hope you and Sara are well.

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

10 posted 2006-11-23 02:35 PM

Sharon, thank you! A new puppy? OH my, I know you are sooo busy!
And Sara is off living her dream in Goldendale Washington, working with Lipizzaners and running around with her camera whenever time permits, photographing those magnificent horses.
Have a great Holiday season! and yes, you WILL hear/see/read more about Love's lights!

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

11 posted 2006-11-23 09:51 PM

Shooting stars surround us
as we fall upon soft grasses,
enfolded within each other's arms.
The stroke of you upon my spirit
awakens sleeping passions,
far too long hidden
'neath layers
of self-imposed exile.

to be continued...

Siyo MidniteSun,I so love to read the soft love poems,to dream such things can be real. I was given at sixteen to a man I had never met,my bride price was high but never for me the first date,first kiss,holding hands beneath a full moons light.I do not complain so very much,in truth I recieved six beautifl children but at times wonder what is this thing love.It was not what my grandmother meant for me,but my fathers choice.

granny!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2006-11-23 10:41 PM

So lovely, Kacy! Happy Thanksgiving, Kacy! *hugs*....jo

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

13 posted 2006-11-25 02:15 AM

I have no words adequate enough to even begin to add to the comments others have already made about this 'write'! When this poet really 'lets go'...and speaks from the absolutely grand depths of her fine mind, heart, and spirit...the results are truly magnificent!

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