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Grays of Privacy
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Grays of Privacy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Grays of Privacy Deep in pools of privacy I sail my minds expectancy The Braille of foam that laps the shore Dissolving into evermore I see the pull on sandy beach The full of every draining leach The agony of gloss and loss Illusions toss of final dross All these loops that sail the eight Adding more and more of freight Skates upon my face of shine Etching me another line And when I see the mirrors kiss The face reflecting the abyss It makes me turn away in awe And sets a Raven at my door I never was too fond its sight Its foul of black and nasty bite |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
All these loops that sail the eight Adding more and more of freight Skates upon my face of shine Etching me another line I feel "those lines"  M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...The scare is there  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And when I see the mirrors kiss The face reflecting the abyss Have you been peeking over my shoulder? *S* I like this very much!!! *S* Great work... as always! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you dear.  Martie Thank you sweet.  suthern No just looking back over my own. |
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