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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-10-31 09:24 AM


Blue Sewing Notions
~*Marge Tindal*~

Threads in a basket not yet used
wrapped on spools and bobbins
waiting the needles' eye
to weave the magic
of a tapestry
of friendship
Snippets of
eyelet lace
that should
have decorated a
quilt of our yesterdays
A button or two I could have
used to close the gap between us
before the cushion of pain grew too ~
                                        ~ u
                                      n
                                    r
                                a
                         v
                              e
                                l
                             l
                           e
                   d
              ~
A package of mending tape
that perhaps could have
hemmed the bridge of our unraveling
Taped measures of just how far
we'd drifted apart
Pins of pain attach themselves
to a small cushion of safety
A thimble of tears I shed
at the scissoring of our memories
As I lay out the pattern I realize
I'd make a lousy seamstress



© Copyright 2006 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-10-31 09:31 AM


I dunno...I think you have this one sewn up well.  Very creative, and touching write.
I love what you can do with just a little thread...

TD

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2 posted 2006-10-31 09:51 AM


Marge/sis

"I'd make a lousy seamstress"  Not when poetry is your thread!!  

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3 posted 2006-10-31 10:14 AM


Oh, Marge! How do you do these?! This is just delightful and going into my library....after I admire it one more time!
hugs, Chris

"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde

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4 posted 2006-10-31 10:17 AM


Love this thread, where you wind your unmeasured kindness in loving words!  Great job!

   Rae

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5 posted 2006-10-31 10:32 AM


Hi, Marge.

What a lovely little shape, tied up in a pretty little thread.  Very nice...

John xo

I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran

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6 posted 2006-10-31 11:01 AM


I just love it Marge. You are so talented
Love,
Betty

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7 posted 2006-10-31 11:18 AM


Now this one is beyond compare Marge!
Fabulous piece of word weaving here.
Love and hugs, Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

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8 posted 2006-10-31 11:37 AM


oh how we wish we could have done some things differently in our lives!

This is an amazing reflection, laced together with rich metaphor...I loved it and love your design, flowing and precise. Well done, as usual.

write on,
writergrl  

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Nicholas Nickleby

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9 posted 2006-10-31 12:02 PM


I love it!
Actually, I love most things from the land of Tindal

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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10 posted 2006-10-31 01:34 PM


Marge,
I can't think of anyone I enjoy reading more.

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11 posted 2006-10-31 02:52 PM


Dear Marge:  Totally charming and imaginative! You have endless talent!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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12 posted 2006-10-31 08:32 PM


You have such wonderful vision Marge.  I really loved this poem.

Hugs Kimberly


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13 posted 2006-10-31 09:11 PM


I love these you do!
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14 posted 2006-10-31 10:24 PM


Oh Marge, I just love it when you show your artistic talent.
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15 posted 2006-11-01 03:34 PM




"A thimble of tears I shed"

Marge
I think I love this
above all your others

it just spoke to me


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16 posted 2006-11-01 05:23 PM


You are so talented! How beautiful!
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17 posted 2006-11-02 12:17 PM


how creative...wonderful work lady, whether stitched or penned
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2006-11-02 11:11 AM



Thank you all ... such a simple thought
that came from going through an antique
sewing cabinet left to me ... the thread
seemed to wind it's way around the objects in the cabinet and I merely had to stitch them together~

I soooooooo appreciate each kind reply~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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