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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-10-31 07:34 AM



Screaming chords come busting out
"If you don't like it" drills through my head.
Loud, the thump of Cinderella
shakes the cobwebs in thunder roar
making this cup of java seem obsolete

and for those few minutes
I am she again,

jammin, doing seventy-five.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2006-10-31 08:30 AM


Gentle Spirit
Can't imagine you doing "seventy-five."

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2006-10-31 08:45 AM


lol...oh Sey, I'm one of those folks who can't drive 55.  Thank you for your visit this morning sir.  
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2006-10-31 09:19 AM


ms gs....shift...go into second now..(grin)
can see you doin this leadfoot!!

Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2006-10-31 09:24 AM


G' morning dark buddie.....had to keep it backed down a notch or two  (grinz)......early morning smokeys on I-81......         Nothing like a good jam, to start the day!  
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-10-31 12:15 PM


Heeeeeeeerrrrrrre comes Smokey

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-10-31 04:36 PM


Loper, you make me smile...thank you!!
amberhues
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7 posted 2006-11-01 06:45 PM


So much said with so few words. I remember Cinderella.  Good cruising music!
Magnus
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8 posted 2006-11-01 06:54 PM


I can see her.....top down, hair streaking
in the wind....the radio at max, the speedo
almost there....and ooooops....forgot her
seatbelt.......

The Lady
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9 posted 2006-11-01 11:56 PM




looking good here
gentle Donna
love the speed
and the radio

nowwww...

punch it!


luminosity
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10 posted 2006-11-02 12:14 PM


oh my lolol...I am a commuter...and I drive the fast lane...in front of the pack...so yes...oh, do I know what you mean...I do try to drive slow, but...
your poem is perfect, what an image !!

passing shadows
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11 posted 2006-11-02 07:34 AM


I use to be a leadfoot...too many tickets now, you see

but every now and then, I chance it, but only very briefly

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