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Song of Dawn
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Song of Dawn |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Song of Dawn Dark the light still rings splendid hallow almost silent sound of air every moving particle aware Dust hit by light’s sweet reason comes for treasure run as time trips within sleep brambled a thorn exposed awake awake awake morning takes the window Dark your midnight song is gone in explanation of the need to pace the inner folded leaves in corner of the sky to sleep anticipating precious morn |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your song of dawn, dear Martie, is exquisitely poetic! Love, Margherita  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Just 1derful! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear Martie! Heart hugs. Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ To awaken to such beauty is poetic~ And you have made it even more lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Dark your midnight song is gone in explanation of the need to pace the inner folded leaves in corner of the sky to sleep anticipating precious morn" ~ A perfectly poetic ending befitting a perfectly poetic poem! Martie, you write with such grace. You're lovely! Giving you a big, warm, loving hug, Linda |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"awake awake awake morning takes the window" your wonderfully painted dawn shone in my window woke me gently... lovely Martie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A delight to read. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's so good to have dark around, in anticipation of another day...  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
So sings the bird before the dawn...lovely melodies you write, Martie!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a poet's dream ~sigh~ to awaken with your muse's visions and put them so gracefully to word |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my, how lovely Martie. "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (does happy dawn dance) Yay, this is such a gorgeous, scintillating poem to embrace the morning to, yay, you paint new colors in the skies of the poetic mind, yay, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light alwas shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
your words capture me Martie |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Every moment is a thing to be treasured, but for some....for some, the treasuring comes naturally. Thank you for sharing one of them, in a way that is also to be treasured. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You do have a way...and I do love that picture you left looking back at me. Thanx! |
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