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Dancer Of Dawn
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Dancer Of Dawn |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Dancer Of Dawn Chaps of white glimmering in light wrapped around faded leather hugs tightly old iron while steely eyes admire a scene seen, in quiet admiration this contrast of pale cradling black in back of a slow sun rising riding the winds of another highway day. Teasingly Sol smiles his blessings reign down and, like shadows, shimmering through trees danseur d'aube greets the day. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, in quiet admiration...of another dawn  M |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, well... look at you ride...  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna This is one of my favorites! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, something here sounds familiar..hmmmmm (grin) kewl ridewrite ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"this contrast of pale cradling black in back of a slow sun rising" lovely concept gentle Donna... I like it too |
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Walter_Mitty_Esq Junior Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 21 |
That is beautiful! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You all bless me with your time here, thanks so much for going along for the ride and enjoying the beautiful morning. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully gentle yet so animated and glaring with the zest of life through the velveteen rising of the waltzing sun, yay! (kiss on cheek) Yay, let's friendship dance to the morning star, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" |
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amberhues Member
since 2006-11-01
Posts 93 |
Quietly admiring the scene you have so vividly painted.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I did just fine until you started speaking Portugese at the end. ... and my chaps are tan and soft as butter I loved it, Donna Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LukeatNFFC Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42Nottingham, England |
"A scene seen" - I love it when a poem contains two consecutive words with different meanings - sort of like a rhyme but immediate. Very good poem. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Donna this is delightful! Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
outstanding write Donna...going back for another read, reminded me of Semore |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Donna, this dance of dawn was decidedly delightful! Your penning grows more graceful with every passing day!  Sending you a warm hug of love and appreciation for your talent and beautiful spirit, Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all so much. Your time visiting me here is so appreciated. Linda? c'mere, hugs you....with a very special thank you for that. I appreciate each of you, my pip friends. Peace to all. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-19-2006 01:01 PM).] |
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