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Sometimes A Sigh
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Sometimes A Sigh |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Sometimes A Sigh ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes a sigh exhaled in joy reaches across the bay finds love waiting on the other side wanting the sigh to say 'I am shared with you' Sometimes a sigh of sorrow's partake ripples the waters across the lake calling for your hand in prayer 'a sigh of gentle share' Sometimes a sigh of sad goodbye drifts across the ebon night wafting on the breeze of whispering winds calling back to a friend 'return when you might' Sometimes a sigh was spent in vain from the friend who shed tears but could not share the pain These are the sighs I listen for most 'for when your tears fall ... I want you to realize I am as close as your next shared sigh' ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, A sigh, is a sigh, is a sigh, Oh my.   |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dontcha just love a Sy sigh?  A lovely write, Marge. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Heartfelt exhale  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"'for when your tears fall ... I want you to realize I am as close as your next shared sigh'" Such a lovely sigh you pen dear Marge. Sending loving hugs your way. No spring, nor summer beauty |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
sighs.... wafting.....on wisperin' winds through an ebony night.....callin' back friends..... that imagery is 'as good as it gets'....in my opinion! [sets a grand 'poetic horizon' to seek in this humble "wordsmith's" journey-quest!] |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very Nice Marge as usual. I enjoed this one very much Peace Rich |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
lovely Marge. hugs, Chris "Be yourself; everyone else is already taken." - Oscar Wilde |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
"Sometimes a sigh was spent in vain from the friend who shed tears but could not share the pain These are the sighs I listen for most 'for when your tears fall ... I want you to realize I am as close as your next shared sigh" ............................................ Your last verse is somewhat like one of my last verses to a poem I once wrote to a friend: "But until I see some small sign from you, That I am wanted, I stand timidly by your side. I can not read so well, That I can meet your needs. Help me please So I won't walk away. Without you ever knowing.. I was there." with love, marty |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Eliqently tender words from a very caring heart. It's beautiful, Marge. Rae |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Absolutely beautiful |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Just lovely and tender!! I did enjoy reading it. Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is absolutely lovely. I can't quit sighing. Love, Joyce |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
This is beautiful I am going to work on elegance in my writing. Thanks for the inspiration. KA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The importance of remembering who you can call on especially when miles distance smiles is extremely important and needed, even in today's age of instant communication via computers. It is not the same, when we need to hear the intake of breath, the hold of thought, and the give of release... in a sigh. Well done, Marge. |
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PEBBLES Member
since 2006-10-30
Posts 69South Australia, Australia |
Reading you makes me feel good. Thanks Helen. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is my new favorite from you! |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
I really like this one Marge, probably my favorite of yours so far. Such beautiful words of comfort and friendship. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I so appreciate the kind replies to this little heart-pour~ When they flow ... effortlessly, as this one did ... they are meant to reside in the hearts of many~ I am glad this one does~  Thank you all~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Beasley Senior Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 682Cheboygan,MI USA |
What a sensitive and sweet poem-a gentle touch very true to your talent! love, Barb |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
just beautiful, this is true love and friendship, and just beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You folks are all SO WONDERFUL ! Thank you from the heart of my little bottom~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, Marge! My favorite part: "Sometimes a sigh was spent in vain from the friend who shed tears but could not share the pain" *sigh* That's beautiful! Love, John I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, John~ In the sharing of tears ... the sorrow is diluted~ I hold friends in tender regard ... wanting to share the joy and their pain~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful poem of sigh...a way to release the stress. love |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bao~ Dearest lady ... thank you for being such a dear, dear friend~ You warm my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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