Open Poetry #39 |
Painting With A Silk Ribbon |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Painting With A Silk Ribbon How warm, the sensation of milk As it streams me, making white roads For my mind to follow As if another heart per chance dreams me Where I could wander in silken step Of China bisque attire The long, sure strokes of midnight As if another place per sigh light Where I might turn to face the sky Along a flaming star to hunger How fond, the vacillations come in their art form As if another trail per touch may keep night warm Softly leaving traces in passions moist Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen Painting dawn in satin scheme As wings move time Along my backless Brush Copyright Kkh 10/24/06 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen Painting dawn in satin scheme As wings move time Along my backless Brush" As smooth as satin Kathleen. Breathtakingly beautiful! Hugs~ Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"How warm, the sensation of milk As it streams me, making white roads For my mind to follow As if another heart per chance dreams me" delicious TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
breathtaking is right! |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love this one!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautifully penned... RDB |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Sledding on a ribbon’s sheen Painting dawn in satin scheme As wings move time Along my backless Brush You should have tied this poem up in a satin bow, that's how beautiful it is. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Loved It! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with everyone else~~and just love it! M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This grabs one and never lets go, my friend...even after the eyes have moved on. Loved it.... jwesley |
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