Open Poetry #39 |
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Uknown, These Things |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Slow like molasses the days pass when I am stuck not here or there I am left with a feeling of being no where When life is moving surrounding me the tick of clock is all I see reminding me... I look back see the footprints I've left behind and sometimes I still don't even know where I've been or where I've yet to go; and I try not to carry to much baggage along with me because there is still so much I've yet to see and sometimes you just have to let bygones be.. Carrying that extra weight is something I don't need and I know that the future is only what I allow myself to conceive I know in my heart that I must follow my dreams down whichever path that it might lead some days I’m not sure of where that will be as I face the unknown, these things I've yet to see. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs...walk on tiptoes in the warm water let everything else float away you only need the night sky and dreams enjoyed your work here |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
I think we're always given enough time to get where we have to be - sometimes we're even there already without knowing it. I'm sure many can relate to the mix of confusion and determination expressed so well. Enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I know in my heart that I must follow my dreams down whichever path that it might lead some days I’m not sure of where that will be as I face the unknown, these things I've yet to see." Yes..so much more yet to see... Wonderful write sweet Donna. Hugs~Nancy Now - while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
We've all been there--Stuck on Life's Hold, somewhat wondering how we got there and most surely wondering just where it is all heading--or did we take a wrong turn somewhere? A good reflective, contemplative read! David Every Day's a Blessing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hey Dark? ![]() thanks big guy... always m'friend, you have the right words. ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's that warm water that will melt the molasses... trust him trust me. It is all about chemistry. ![]() |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and sometimes you just have to let bygones be.." so true Gentle Spirit so well done... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Feel like I'm looking over your shoulder while you're writing in your diary, Donna. I love honest writing. *hugs*....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
When you know you have to follow the dream whereever it goes, then you know it all. I like the feel of this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
just follow your dreams let them lead you where ever your heart will follow Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wonderfully expressed - enjoyed! RDB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And you will as your thoughts turn into choices and actions...create well...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ooh just me had to come back for another read... such wonderful words! RDB ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dearest Poet, allow each day to just be...don't fret about what is to be, it will come to you....you are indeed a gentle spirit and a very kind lady....exceptional writing....thank you |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, my friend, have missed your words while I was away...loved this... jwesley |
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