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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
you are cold and unpredictable as black ice how many have you left at your side stranded crushed breathless but I think all you need is some warmth someone to stay for a while not to just ride over and leave so, if I press my heart against yours - will you melt... or spin me...? CG [This message has been edited by CastleGuard (10-18-2006 06:45 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice...enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
Real nice, i enjoyed reading!... Good Work! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe exactly what is needed  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
um hum I like this "will you melt... or spin me...?" nice... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hmmm? reminds me of a song..you spin me round round, like a record baby round, round,..... Ice melts with the warmest of hearts! |
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