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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
my eyes were your dress; at sundown I shed my needless sight - my hands became your skin, your sighs my compass... and now - no way to leave... CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Superbly rendered! Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh CG well this can leave you breathless absolutely |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
"my eyes were your dress" I like that, good description. Once you are truly insane, it’s all picnics with Kafka after that. See, it’s the process of going crazy that you gotta worry about. |
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JLHunter Senior Member
since 2006-10-08
Posts 557CA United States |
Hi, CG. Simply enchanting... I will have to find my own true love to experience such tender passion. Until then, I must write. Great work. John I prefer to be a dreamer among the humblest, with visions to be realized, than lord among those without dreams and desires. -Khalil Gibran |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
B R E A T H T A K I N G !! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Aww, such sweet surrender...   EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Lock and key....underneath loves magic spell~ ~ARH |
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