Dreaming Still Of You and Camelot

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Open Poetry #39

Dreaming Still Of You and Camelot

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

0 posted 2006-10-17 05:22 PM

Dreaming still of you and Camelot

moonlight shimmers on the water,
as its spashes echo in the night.
there is the chill of October in the air,
the aroma of damp fallen leaves,
drifts in the breeze.
you have lit a fire to warm us,
the light from the flames,
sets our skin aglow.
your lips, kiss mine.
your hands caress me.
our bodies fold together into one.
I, awake and reach for you,
for un-tolded moments my heart stands still,
it was but, yet another dream,
of you and Camelot.

BugBuggy
October 2006

Sarkany
Junior Member

since 2006-10-14

Posts 32

1 posted 2006-10-17 06:33 PM

Hi

I think we have all been there once or twice. It is always disappointing when it all turns out to be a dream. Well written.

Sarkany

deasomnians
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 87
California

2 posted 2006-10-18 02:16 AM

I love this. I don't quite get the commas separating subjects from verbs, but otherwise it's great.

"Nature has implanted in our minds an insatiable longing to seek the truth" - CJCL Convention Theme 2005

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2006-10-18 09:00 AM

Very pretty.
I know if that certain person was still here he too would love it.
:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

BugBuggy
Member

since 2005-12-19

Posts 130
michigan

4 posted 2006-10-21 11:36 PM

thank you all for the nice comments they are greatly appreciated

BugBuggy

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