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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-10-15 03:20 AM


Each click of the metronome
Breaks the bow from the rainbow
Raining blue, green and red
And bleeding into orange and purple
The hand sweeping from right to left
Gathering shards of color before they become tears
Magically molding them into wishes granted
To place under the pillows of the sleeping innocents
The constant ticking of time
Becoming a carol of forgiveness
Until, once again, the rainbow arcs
And a bridge is created for humanity to dance across

aziza

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-10-15 07:31 AM


Such pictures, Az.  From the wood and bronze of the metronome, all the way to a peace-filled valley...and all of the variances humans allow inbetween.  
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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2 posted 2006-10-15 08:03 AM


ms az, interesting layers of thought here...well done
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-10-15 09:17 AM


A wonderful piece of writing...
Beautiful indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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4 posted 2006-10-15 05:10 PM



colors of forgiveness
ticks of time
so well done
aziza...

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