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Open Poetry #39

Some Other Day

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

0 posted 2006-10-14 12:11 PM

I wonder
does he wait
or does he run between the raindrops
to find solace
in a memory
or two
or three

or just to try to get to me?

I wait
since
age has made me more comfortable
and patient,

not up for puddle jumping
or racing trains
just to find
the grass is the same color
on the other side of the tracks.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2006-10-14 12:22 PM

I can't seem to
leave this one alone Dixie...
dang it's good
it's just...
mind catching

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2006-10-14 12:32 PM

Exquisite imagery, Dixie:

"I wonder
does he wait
or does he run between the raindrops
to find solace
in a memory
or two
or three"

misc

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2006-10-14 08:23 AM

Oh...you inspire me this time.
Wonder visits here.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-10-14 10:24 AM

thanks ladies

just something off the top of my head last night

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

5 posted 2006-10-15 05:01 PM

Dixie... Words of wisdom dear lady. Glad you are okay...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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