Open Poetry #39 |
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the eyes of love |
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artexeres Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 156south africa |
Have you ever looked into the eyes of love? They entice they evolve They bring up those feelings that only you and me have ever shared They lay so dormant soft touches like brush strokes against my soul as your breath becomes words then in silence I slip into this noise of love Love embraces with open arms it doesn’t hold back As it caresses like a soft summer breeze with the alluring fragrance of the first taste of love. |
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Sarkany Junior Member
since 2006-10-14
Posts 32 |
Hi Have you ever looked into the eyes of love? They entice, they evolve They bring up feelings, that only you and I have shared They lay dormant; soft touches like brush strokes against my soul as your breath becomes words. Then, in silence, I slip into this noise of love Love embraces with open arms. It doesn’t hold back as it caresses like a soft summer breeze with the alluring fragrance of the first taste of love. Very nice poem. I made some structural suggestions. Sarkany |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Garth~ This is soft and lovely~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ahhh that first taste of love this is lovely garth... |
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