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Nothing More To Say
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Nothing More To Say |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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Nothing More To Say By Paul Wilson I never thought it would come down to this you and I the lesser of each other A heart without the beat A sky without the blue A night without the moon A ship without the sea Tender moments I will forever miss sadly there will never be another A dream that’s incomplete A longing to see you A special afternoon A lock that has no key Special times shared I’ll always remember even though you may not care anymore A well without water A bird without it’s wings A poem without a rhyme A smile without a face Will you think of me come this December and hope I’ll come knocking on your front door A father missing his daughter A prayer today and what it brings A memory that got lost in time A love I will never replace Tomorrow will bring a new day With nothing more for me to say I hope and pray you are okay I love you is all I can say ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 I'm sitting here touching the screen without a words to say |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
so very sad |
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calxaed Junior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 21North Lincolnshire, UK |
Really very lovely. Beautifully written and poigniant. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ You pen so tenderly ...~ 'A poem without a rhyme' Well, sir ... the rhyme isn't always necessary when one has such a marvelous talent for presentation of his thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Paul "I love you is all I can say" The words, the poem...very touching. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oh wow. Paul, this is a beautifully penned work of art. Wonderful! JL  |
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Troy Member
since 2006-06-04
Posts 52B.C. |
A touching poem of hindsight it sounds to me. The title too is somewhat coincidental because it precisely describes my feelings at this time. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So touching and heartfelt Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my friend, you know where I'm at |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This is one of the best poems I have read here at Pip. You really touched my heart. Huggs Kimberly |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
LeeJ...Thanks so much for your tender reply...Paul 1slick Lady...No tears, they only get my computer screen wet..LOL...Paul calxaed...Thank you very much. Glad you took time to read and reply...Paul Marge...Dear lady your reply brings a smile to my face and a warm feeling to my heart.You know how to cheer a person up. Thanks so very much...Paul Martie...Your reply is touching and very special to me. Thank you for knowing and caring...Paul JL...Hi old buddy. You know I really appreciate your reply, it means a great deal to me...Paul Troy...I hope all is well with you. I am glad you related to this poem and really thank you for reading and replying...Paul HopeS...Thank you seems so bland, but I really mean it very much...Paul Dixie...Fear not, all is okay sort of, I've just been trying to say how I miss her and feel about her for over a year now and I think I did it the best way I could, now if only she would read it that would be the greatest. I hope all is well with you, I've been busy and need to catch up on my reading here. Thanks again for being a friend that cares...Paul jody5...I am very thankful for your kind and caring reply. Glad you liked this and thanks for making me smile...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
I missed this one. I seem to be out of time to read lately. I liked the words you penned, So I am sending it back. martyjo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Paul, mine turned 18, graduated high school and then moved to Kansas with her boyfriend. She rarely calls or answers her phone. I do understand how you feel. And God it hurts. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
martyjo...Thanks for digging this one up. I really appreciate your reply...Paul Dixie...I guess we are sort of in the same boat but for maybe different reasons. It does hurt everyday but I've done what I could and have run out of hope that we will ever get back together. Thanks so much for you kind words and you stay strong and be ready for that phone call from her...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful, heartfelt poem that really touches my heart. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Paul, Such touching words penned here for us to read. I almost feel like I'm looking on something not meant for my eyes when reading this as it is such a personal piece. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
 Simply put,very touching. ^_^ ~J. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Paul, my heart goes out to you. I wish I could say that I don't know what this is like. However, the upside of not being able to, is that I can tell you that, in my case, is that it has got quite a lot better, which I thought would be impossible. Thus, no matter how impossible, it may seem in your case, it is NOT IMPOSSIBLE - nothing is impossible. I just simply refused to take No or Negativity for an answer and kept on and on and on trying and I am still trying. She now does reply - very briefly, but quite kindly - I will never see her again as she is in Australia and I am in South Africa and neither of us have the money nor the ability, nor probably the desire, to travel to the other's country, not do I think I would be welcome there if I did. Keep up writing / phoning / visiting, whatever is the best and most feasible in your case. Don't have nothing more to say. Keep it up for the rest of your life. Apologise (even if you did nothing wrong or, as in my case, don't know what you have done), beg, plead, ignore the problem or discuss it, write chatty, friendly emails, send cards electronic or real ones, presents (but not expensive ones - ones that show you have put thought and time into it - even thought into the wrapping paper and the way you wrapped it). As the parent, it is our place to do that. We are the ones that must be wiser and more loving, no matter what the circumstances. My parents didn't/weren't. I wish you strength, courage, wisdom, determination, peace, the attitude necessary to reach your daughter, and loads and loads of good luck! - Owl |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
So beautiful, so poignant! |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Oh my heart is aching as i am drawn into this poem. Beautiful words put together with such longing for the love it once knew.  Debo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Paul, I do not know the circumstances surrounding yours and your daughter's estrangement, but with a father whose love is as deep and as abiding as yours, she surely must be missing you. Hopefully in time the fences will mend ~ or better still ~ come tumbling down and you will be reunited. Your pen is a veritable extension of your bleeding, yet ever so beautiful, heart. Giving you a great big healing hug, Linda |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Paul, this makes my heart ache. May all be well in the future. Prayin' for ya. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Sue...Thank you for reading and caring...Paul hoot_owl_rn...You have read my heart, Thank you so much for your sweet reply...Paul Shadow In Blue...Thank you. I really appreciate the read & reply...Paul OwlSA...I will always have hope , but for now as the title says I have nothing More To Say. Thanks so much for your tender words of encouragement...Paul aziza...Thank You very much...Paul Debo...Thanks, perhaps another time and my words will be different...Paul Linda...You are really an Angel. Thanks for caring and maybe things will be different soon. Thanks again...Paul Chris...I hope things are better in the future also. Thanks for the prayers...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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