»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
Drunk with Sadness
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
Drunk with Sadness |
|
|
BeautifullyBroken84 Junior Member
since 2005-11-16
Posts 11Minnesota, USA |
It's a work in progress, but I wanted to get it out there for now. Thoughts, criticisms, etc. are welcome! I haven't posted in awhile, but I am going to start up again, because I miss it so! Today, I peel away this skin, Today, I expose the pain within, I’m gonna rip my heart out, and hang it to dry, From the clothesline draped with fading sky, Below, in a bucket, I’ll collect all my tears, and Release the frantic flood of my fears, Drip by drop, drop by drip… Here, my friend, come take a sip, Drink it down, but drink it slow Taste my hurt, and then you’ll know What haunts, taunts me, in my sleep What dark, dark dreams silently creep Into my head, into my soul Laughing, teasing on their tippiest of toes… |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Rachel Dianne - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome back! I hope you stay longer and write lots more! |
||
Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I drank, I sipped, Felt all the pain, glad you're writing here again.  Nice work. |
||
|
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I could taste the salt of your thoughts ... look forward to more posts. Ct |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Beautiful... write again soon. Sounds as if you have a lot to bring forth. Looking forward to more. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
