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Open Poetry #38

Love of My Life

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

0 posted 2006-06-11 03:58 AM

Love of My Life

You are more than life can offer,
Beyond the thoughts of dreams and smiles;
You were my gratitude of breath for the next day,
When it seemed my heart would sleep and sleep…

You are the embodiment of poets and truth,
Bending the dark lines of my passionate pen
Into lines of dreams, happiness and hope,
When it seemed my soul would forever weep…

You are the dancer in the fantasies of men,
A sculpture of beauty and black gold,
Molded from the rarest treasures at the rainbow’s end,
When it seemed the sun would never beam upon me, love…

Marcel

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2006-06-11 09:02 AM

So very jubilant.
A good look on you Keith.

All happiness,
TD

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

2 posted 2006-06-11 12:49 PM

Molded from the rarest treasures at the rainbows end. Thats the line that brings it out. Nice!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-06-11 01:04 PM

This curves beauty, Keith...
and rolls easily
off the tongue.

Beautiful!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-06-11 01:10 PM

Very nicely done, so much admiration and
hope for times to come.

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

5 posted 2006-06-11 08:38 PM

Those last four lines were especially lovely

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