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Open Poetry #38

A Bedtime Story

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

0 posted 2006-06-08 11:01 PM

....and when the evening sun in tide
put's to rest it's cloudy bride;
the murky dog star barks in fright
into our blossomed darkened night.

And when the sum of sin is paid;
and every other meter maid....

with arms across

and lip un-bent,
blowing postage on a kiss;

the monster that's called "never paid"
quits hawking down the aisle!

I'll never more write silly rhymes
and sleep

a very,...

little ....

while.

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

1 posted 2006-06-09 12:29 PM

Mr. Rhyme, you have just lived up to your name with that fun little piece!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2006-06-09 08:14 PM

Interesting write, enjoyed....you do have
a way of expressing thoughts.

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

3 posted 2006-06-09 11:54 PM

Thanks!

Will

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