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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I am but a restless wanderer dazed and confused teetering on the seams of insanity. No level playing field with contest fair, no heads up notice rules constantly changing making stability seem such an awfully strange foothold to have to try to find until, quite often I feel I'm losing my mind in bits and pieces I'm scattered around until no longer do I feel as though I am one but rather, a total combination of things remaining undone in a place where closure does not exist I try so very hard to resist all of these things that lie deep within me So confusing is this reality. My fingertips bleed as I claw, trying to climb these pristine walls which could lead to higher ground where greener grass is sometimes found but strong enough; I haven't grown yet to break away with no regret. With all of my might I fight this fall that could push me over the edge, I'm hanging on; clinging tightly to the ledge... No, I have not lost this game. seek the flame within yourself |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 many kudos here! You will make it! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I loved the open heartedness of this write. Could visualize the smooth walls towering up...but to see the imaged before taking the plunge, that's quite a grounding. There was hope here, and good wishes. TD |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Ah So that's what you've been doing. ::smiles:: (((( Gentle Spirit )))) ((((D)))(((O)))(((N)))(((N)))(((A)))))) Powerful write ! :: bows :: |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So confusing is this reality... ~*~ Always! But follow your nose... you'll get there!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Think of it as an egg that was scrambled and is now whole again, in one piece... I think you are headed there, but I know what it feels like to have days like that. Excellently expressed.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit As the famous Yogi Barra once said, "It ant over till it's over. Good write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I'm hanging on; clinging tightly to the ledge... No, I have not lost this game." You are still hanging on Donna. And you're going to make it!! Heart hugs, Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 thanks everyone! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 keep flying high.... And so it those we live with |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This poem was excellently expressed!!!!!!! I Enjoyed reading this!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Just a brief fly by to stop in and say thanks to all, you are all missed. Time...Geez... never seems to be enough of it at the moment. Hugs and peace to poetry land.  |
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