Open Poetry #38 |
Hallways |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
today I walked down hallways down rows of endless doors endless doorknobs endless windows all marked with infinity all meaning everything and nothing the ever constant contridiction careful not to touch them they might implode with no lights no flashes no truimphant crash to prove there was ever anything if we take our shoes off and walk down hallways careful not to touch careful not to breathe we might live forever endless years till nothing and everything |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such is life living within the ''flux''....life is a series of doors...doors of decision...doors of exclusion..doors of the mind...fling them open and be damned i say...leave not one unopened..enjoyed this write thank you.. Goldenrose. |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
This poem speaks to me of the almost existential angst that one can only cure by choosing for the self which door to open and what has value. An interesting write that reminds me of making fundamental decisions about life. PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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