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A Simple Curiosity |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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. The breeze here is soft tonight; do you feel it where you sleep in your processed air conditioned keep, with your doting lover and your bodyguards; can you hope to smell the deep restless living sea gently teasing me along this phosphorescent line of sand, waves playing, licking rhythmically at my thoughts as easily as my feet find threads of steps among the prizes and wet debris strewn carelessly, offerings to nobody, catalysts to crack awareness from raw energy the Mother ocean gives to me; can you feel it in your dreams; can you still reach that far that you remember me? ©2006 by icebox . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"offerings to nobody, catalysts to crack awareness from raw energy" Hi, this is nobody....lol. Seriously, Mr. C., this is one beautiful blue piece.  ....jo |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"offerings to nobody, catalysts to crack awareness from raw energy" Hi, this is nobody....lol. Seriously, Mr. C., this is one beautiful blue piece. ....jo |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox "can you hope to smell the deep restless living sea gently teasing me" Does it take two, or can it be enough that you hope? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A great write, so visual in my mind as I read...and the feeling of the thoughts so vivid and easily felt. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write! Wonderful use of imagery. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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