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Riding Clouds
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Riding Clouds |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia 
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Fluffy white patches Float on a background of blue Above and below I drift along, upon clouds On the surface of the lake |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love looking at the clouds  very peaceful |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely wonderful! For just a moment, while reading, I was riding these clouds together with you. It's a special feeling of true oneness with All there is. Love, Margherita |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I found myself doing the same thing a couple of weeks ago and I wanted to write about it. I'm glad you did! There's something filling about seeing above and below the clouds simultaneously. Enjoyed. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful tanka You're sooooo good at this form of chinese poetry and I love the thought - riding clouds. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Loved this, Larry. My brother is a pilot and he's been in the air, opened the window of his small plane and touched the clouds! What glorious creations they are. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
This is one reason when you go fishing and come back home empty handed your not dissapointed. Enjoyed Uriah. :-) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
XO ~ A pretty scene painted so poetically.   EA  |
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