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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359
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LILY CREEK this morning, after a night of unexpected cold, the geese walked on the water where yesterday they swam and fed they looked at each other the way the disciples must have looked at Christ when he skated Galilee http:/www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com [This message has been edited by shirtless (05-21-2006 10:31 PM).] |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
Deep thoughts. A great metaphor leaves me deep thougths as yours always do. keep writing, picturegramic :) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
An amusing and charming write. Having an observant eye is a great asset for a poet!  Love & Light A former North Bay-ite! EA  |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
A beautiful picture painted in words.  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful imagery! Enjoyed this treat very much! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - What awesome imagery! Your use of 'religious' themes are powerful. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Jacer Ace New Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 5North Caroline, USA |
great imagery=D keep up the good work forgotten memories begining to form, morphed and shaped they shatter only to be reborn and repieced |
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