Open Poetry #38 |
Lacy Shed |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Night plays elongated in slip shadows of lacy shed fingertipping with light in bawdry colors drawing me nigh to sultry sigh~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I love it when you write this sultry feeling. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
indeed sighs Margie, this was great!!!! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Even without your usual picture this is very colorful and beautiful. Love, joyce |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Did it just get warm in here or is my collar too tight Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
very clever not to mention seductive! martyjo |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I am agreeing with those before me. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Marge! You artistic talents are just beautiful. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all sooooo much for seeming to totally enjoy your perceptions of this one~ The corker is that last evenings sun-in-set inspired this little piece of fluff~ As the light played across the back meadow she seemed to stretch her ink into these thoughts~ However ... I do realize that once *gifted* the beauty is in the eyes of the beholder~ Thank you for beholding~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - [email protected] |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really like this Marge |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Beautifully penned little piece, Marge. Unusual format, but very effective. Cheers, Bill |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
fantastic-ally penned! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah Marge this is so nice Florida weather can make you feel positively sultry... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I love the way this feels..... very nice...!! hugs, g "Home..is for free expression, not for good impression..." |
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PatAngel Member
since 2004-04-05
Posts 451California |
Dear Marge, Love the sultry, warm feeling. 'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
When I read this a picture came to mind. Lace curtains, moving slighty with the wind, and delicate shadows dancing upon the wall. Loverly my friend Hugs BonBon |
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