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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2006-08-31 12:31 PM




  Night plays
      elongated
   in slip shadows
      of lacy shed
       fingertipping with light
  in bawdry colors
      drawing me nigh
  to sultry
   sigh~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Martie
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1 posted 2006-08-31 01:09 PM


Marge/sis...I love it when you write this sultry feeling.  
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2 posted 2006-08-31 01:23 PM


indeed sighs

Margie, this was great!!!!

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3 posted 2006-08-31 01:36 PM


Even without your usual picture this is very colorful and beautiful.  Love, joyce
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4 posted 2006-08-31 02:04 PM


Did it just get warm in here or is my collar too tight

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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5 posted 2006-08-31 05:58 PM


very clever not to mention seductive!
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6 posted 2006-08-31 06:15 PM


I am agreeing with those before me.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
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7 posted 2006-08-31 07:24 PM


Beautiful Marge! You artistic talents are just beautiful.
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2006-08-31 07:31 PM



Thank you all sooooo much for seeming to totally enjoy your perceptions of this one~

The corker is that last evenings sun-in-set inspired this little piece of fluff~

As the light played across the back meadow she seemed to stretch her ink into these thoughts~

However ... I do realize that once *gifted*
the beauty is in the eyes of the beholder~

Thank you for beholding~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com       

Betty
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9 posted 2006-09-01 10:45 AM


I really like this Marge
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10 posted 2006-09-01 11:10 AM


Beautifully penned little piece, Marge. Unusual format, but very effective.
Cheers,
Bill

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11 posted 2006-09-01 01:54 PM


fantastic-ally penned!
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12 posted 2006-09-01 02:51 PM




ah Marge
this is so nice
Florida weather can make you
feel positively sultry...

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13 posted 2006-09-01 08:30 PM


I love the way this feels.....
very nice...!!

hugs, g

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PatAngel
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14 posted 2006-09-02 12:03 PM


Dear Marge,

Love the sultry, warm feeling.

'When you find a dream within your heart, don't ever let it go.
For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

Bonnie j
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15 posted 2006-09-02 10:48 AM


When I read this a picture came to mind.
Lace curtains, moving slighty with the wind, and delicate shadows dancing upon the wall.

Loverly my friend
Hugs
BonBon

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