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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-08-31 07:31 AM


Born in the heart

sometime beginning with

the smallest of seed;

nurtured, evolving continually

through thought, in dreams

a slightest feeling held

a certain something

that can't be seen

or touched

but still is felt

as if but a breath



in smiles and fears

in heartaches, and tears

emotions bleeding

blending into

who we are



in transformation

on the pathways of life

it’s here, in the journey

the exhales of moments

that becomes a part of us



in this evolution of emotions

we learn our hearts

and trust

that no matter the path

or length of journey

what remains a constant

is love.....

{Susan, thank you, ever so much for the
pleasure, the honor, and friendship. }



seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2006-08-31 07:40 AM


girls, you did it good together, enjoyed
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-08-31 07:43 AM



Marvelous melding, little ones...

seamless!


JosephF
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3 posted 2006-08-31 07:52 AM


Very nice indeed, it's Excellent!
LeeJ
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4 posted 2006-08-31 07:56 AM


that can't be seen

or touched

but still is felt

as if but a breath


AMEN!!!  What lovely words strung together
softly, tenderly speaking of the pearl of magnificance

lovely!!!!!

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-08-31 11:10 AM


You make a fabulous TEAM
More!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-08-31 06:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2006-08-31 07:14 PM


You two did great together. Excellent work!
The Lady
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8 posted 2006-09-01 01:06 AM




wonderful duet!

Magnus
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9 posted 2006-09-01 08:49 PM


Nicely done ladies,  a very good message,
a great collaboration.

*Alli4000*
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10 posted 2006-09-01 09:55 PM


I really enjoyed this...you guys did great!

~Alli~

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2006-09-02 12:13 PM


Thank you all sweet friends, but I have sweet Sue to thank for this lil gem.
She tossed out an idea and I gave her my view on it, she took it from there folks, and made it just oh so very beautiful.

I just spit a few words out, she gave it all the shine!!!  

Much, much thanks and gratitude.
I would love to see more duets from out talented poets here. HUGS.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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with you
12 posted 2006-09-02 02:50 PM


thank you for the reads and replies
Donna, thank you SO MUCH for doing this with me....Don't let her kid you guys, she did most of this

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