Open Poetry #38 |
Evolution Of Emotion ( A Duet With SEA) |
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Born in the heart sometime beginning with the smallest of seed; nurtured, evolving continually through thought, in dreams a slightest feeling held a certain something that can't be seen or touched but still is felt as if but a breath in smiles and fears in heartaches, and tears emotions bleeding blending into who we are in transformation on the pathways of life it’s here, in the journey the exhales of moments that becomes a part of us in this evolution of emotions we learn our hearts and trust that no matter the path or length of journey what remains a constant is love..... {Susan, thank you, ever so much for the pleasure, the honor, and friendship. } seek the flame within yourself |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
girls, you did it good together, enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marvelous melding, little ones... seamless! |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 30 |
Very nice indeed, it's Excellent! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
that can't be seen or touched but still is felt as if but a breath AMEN!!! What lovely words strung together softly, tenderly speaking of the pearl of magnificance lovely!!!!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You make a fabulous TEAM More! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You two did great together. Excellent work! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
wonderful duet! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done ladies, a very good message, a great collaboration. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I really enjoyed this...you guys did great! ~Alli~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all sweet friends, but I have sweet Sue to thank for this lil gem. She tossed out an idea and I gave her my view on it, she took it from there folks, and made it just oh so very beautiful. I just spit a few words out, she gave it all the shine!!! Much, much thanks and gratitude. I would love to see more duets from out talented poets here. HUGS. seek the flame within yourself |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you for the reads and replies Donna, thank you SO MUCH for doing this with me....Don't let her kid you guys, she did most of this |
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