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miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

0 posted 2006-08-31 08:57 PM

Proof in the pudding
Lasts only until its gone
New dessert beyond

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2006-08-31 09:49 PM

Now, this one raises an eyebrow or two...
Sheesh...I only have two... Like the
thought.

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-31 09:55 PM

humm food is nice
: )

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

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OH

3 posted 2006-08-31 10:03 PM

Magnus and Neotec,

Oh, boy! Maybe I should have thought this one out a bit more! Believe it or not, it was one of my 'deeply contemplated, serious poems!' I can now see where it "might raise a few eyebrows!" Anyway...
glad for the multiple interpretations. That's the stuff that makes life interesting, eh? Hm...perhaps inspiration for a humorous poem? Yeah!

miscellanea

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-08-31 11:52 PM

::smiles::
Excellent !
:: bows ::

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-09-01 12:30 PM

miscellanea

I took it quite seriously
but I can see it's open to
interpretation

I like it

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2006-09-01 10:00 AM

This belongs on top

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-09-01 08:43 PM

May all your puddings be 'just desserts'.

EA

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2006-09-01 09:25 PM

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

9 posted 2006-09-01 11:17 PM

mmmmm! layered with meaning, and a sweet read. Is this senryu? I get it confused with haiku, but I love this form of poetry, succinct and full of impact.

Dessert, indeed! Next on the menu, flambeau!

hugs

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2006-09-02 11:53 AM

You are all so kind and very much appreciated. Thank you. As to what form, I don't usually adhere to form, but I think this is Senryu. I believe Haiku deals with nature. See you in #39.

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