Open Poetry #38 |
Naturally |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Judy saw the baby bunny on her daily nature walk. She saw the fox draw closer. Watched it step and stop and stalk. Judy caught the little baby. Freeing it from certain death. She watched the horrid hunter flee and cussed it 'neath her breath. The fox made it's cautious circle and returned back to her den, with empty mouth and empty teats and hungry pups again. Judy glowed from her act of kindness. Glad for being at the site. Unaware of starving fox pups that perished in the night. Judy took her nature walk next day. She let the precious babe go free. She kissed it on it's tiny head and said, " Live naturally ! " She smiled at the baby's hurried hops. But she could only gape and gawk as the bunny rose to heaven 'neath a swooping red-tailed hawk. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How true it is, Larry. When we step in to stop the course of true nature, we are just as much the enemy as anything else that comes naturally. Well done! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh BRAVA Larry, this is outstanding work!! |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
woow nice |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This belongs on TOP! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Oh poor bunny... but like you said...live naturally. A most pleasant read. I like your style more and more!! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Such a sad story but so true that we can't interfere with nature. What is meant to be will be. Enjoyed "muchly"! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Makes me wonder if we do not interfere too often in the lives of humans also. Too much coddling may not be wise all the time. Thanks, martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and what to do, oh what to do? pitiful, yet, nature's way... thank you for sharing. |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
so wonderfully said |
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