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keep breathing.... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 ....I just keep breathing.... these days, my thoughts of you are scattered in between moments made up of life and the demands of the day I like to stay busy my mind in idle can be cruel questioning my heart when I know the answers aren’t there ...but should be, somehow and your absence....this missing you is a well, made from a kind of suffocating sadness brimming with anguished tears I throw wishes in, watching helplessly as they drown .....it chokes me those memories..... these damn emotions..... the endless echoing .....‘ why ’ I clear my throat focus on something ~ anything else and tell myself .....just keep breathing..... ~SEA~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ah Yes sweetie, like I told you....I UNDERSTAND, and am hoping you find peace and a smile soon. Hugs You. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
dry your tears dear one let your thoughts drift aimlessly remember good things breathe in the essence of love filling your wonderful heart ~*~ pray instead of wish for faith is trust perfected immutable hope incontrovertible love absolutely lives in you Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
day at a time suesea, live it full and don't try to carry yesterday or wonders about tomorrow along too..enjoyed the view here |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As always, penning wonders.  Love, Mom |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
So touching and heartfelt , Their absence and missing someone ... yes I know those aches hope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Again ... you move us with your emotional thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"just keep breathing" ~ at times in my life, even that, is easier said than done... ~Emotions wistfully, and ever so poetically, expressed. It's been a while, SEA! Loving Light, EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
baby steps kiddo...baby steps  |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
feeling a bit out of breath .... sometimes the higher we rise, the harder the air our emotions do weigh so it's something we sometimes take for granted breathing Ct |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, You pen love and it's side effects so very well. I can feel it.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"Just keep breathing" If only it were just that simple. A beautiful read, and excellent write. I don't think it ever gets easier, rather, we just learn to do it more efficiently. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
".....just keep breathing....." I think that did it for us all... excellent work SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...gotta agree with the dark stranger... |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
".....it chokes me those memories..... these damn emotions..... the endless echoing .....‘ why ’ I clear my throat focus on something ~ anything else and tell myself .....just keep breathing....." There is great impact in the ending... I almost choke on your last verses here. Been through it. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
perhaps expressing it so well will facilitate the ease of the air in and out.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
a case of staying alive a poet who cares |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
wooow, just wooow |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i miss you too   |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for your great replies, I guess some days, I just can't stay busy enough...  and Kissy Face.... you are so cute! |
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