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Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-07 03:38 PM

How I love
to touch you,
to caress you,
to feel the warmth
you give to my hands.
Your musky scent fills my nostrils
as my eyes roam over your topography.
You are my most treasured love,
my most dearly loved endeavor,
while I discern your depths.
Anticipating your climax
I place you, my tome,
upon my chest
and sleep.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-08-07 04:25 PM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHA

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2006-08-07 04:31 PM

Oh, Doctor Love, I too have a love affair with old books!

You really had me going there for a while! lol

Loving Light,
EA

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-08-07 04:56 PM

Well, naturally, and quietly,
this needs to be libraried...

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-08-07 05:16 PM

*Grinning from ear to ear here*

Hugs YOU!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

5 posted 2006-08-07 05:26 PM

Content I am sure. I well understand this. Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

6 posted 2006-08-07 06:13 PM

So many times I too, have slept beneath his papery arms. What a wonderful way to describe this.
Very nice write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2006-08-07 07:38 PM

whew, a nice warm treasure chest write

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

8 posted 2006-08-08 06:31 PM

Oh dear, you peeked into my bedroom, didn't you LOL I so often wake up with my glasses on and my book in hands.
Lovely write.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

9 posted 2006-08-09 10:42 AM

Susan ~ Thank you, gal

EA ~ Grinning with you...

Sunshine ~ I am honored

Enchanted One ~ How I love your hugs!

Kristabell ~ I believe your first time to reply to one of my offerings. Thank you!

seraphin ~ Many thanks, indeed!

Midnitesun ~ I am, once again, honored.

Titia ~ It has been soooooooooo long! Thank you for reading my work one more time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

10 posted 2006-08-12 08:04 PM

what a wonderful write!
gotta love those old books
i've fallen asleep like this
soooo many times

(but I've never described it -quite- like that)
*fans herself*
~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

11 posted 2006-08-14 01:56 PM

A lot of book lovers here. Just the place to post your erotic cover. best to you, martyjo

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

12 posted 2006-08-14 02:51 PM

Sheli ~
Hope you cooled off a little bit

martyjo ~
Erotic? Nawwwwwwwwwwwww...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (08-14-2006 03:30 PM).]

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

13 posted 2006-08-15 02:34 AM

I love this.
You got my senses charged up.
I am ready to touch and smell
taste and ... ummmm... yeah, gotta go.

aziza

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2006-08-30 01:05 PM

You're lucky. *G* I always wake up when he lands on my chest or nose! *S* Ah... but then I go back to appreciating his charms. *G*

Enjoyed so much!!!

Lisey
Junior Member

since 2006-08-27

Posts 36
UK (Wales)

15 posted 2006-08-30 01:19 PM

so lovely!

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

16 posted 2006-09-01 04:27 AM

At first, i thought it's another love poem for a gal...until the last...

Great metaphor...I like it.

enjoyed.

Wonder where you get this witty idea...lolx

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

17 posted 2006-09-01 08:54 AM

this was so real...loved the mystery and the ending...just goes to show ya, we're so at home in the treasures of our stories....

enjoyed

playing.with.crayons
Member

since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

18 posted 2006-09-01 09:14 AM

my most treasured love indeed...
why, you took the thoughts from my hands and the words from my pen!
Only you managed to phrase it a lot better.
Darn. But not really.
So much Enjoyed!
cheye xx

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