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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2006-08-07 03:38 PM



How I love
to touch you,
to caress you,
to feel the warmth
you give to my hands.
Your musky scent fills my nostrils
as my eyes roam over your topography.
You are my most treasured love,
my most dearly loved endeavor,
while I discern your depths.
Anticipating your climax
I place you, my tome,
upon my chest
and sleep.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2006 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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with you
1 posted 2006-08-07 04:25 PM


AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHA


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-08-07 04:31 PM


Oh, Doctor Love, I too have a love affair with old books!

You really had me going there for a while! lol

Loving Light,
EA

Sunshine
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3 posted 2006-08-07 04:56 PM



Well, naturally, and quietly,
this needs to be libraried...

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-08-07 05:16 PM


*Grinning from ear to ear here*
Hugs YOU!!

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Kristabell
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5 posted 2006-08-07 05:26 PM


Content I am sure. I well understand this. Nice write.

Kristabell

"Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life."

seraphin
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6 posted 2006-08-07 06:13 PM


So many times I too, have slept beneath his papery arms. What a wonderful way to describe this.
Very nice write.

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2006-08-07 07:38 PM


whew, a nice warm treasure chest write
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2006-08-08 06:31 PM


Oh dear, you peeked into my bedroom, didn't you LOL I so often wake up with my glasses on and my book in hands.
Lovely write.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2006-08-09 10:42 AM


Susan ~  Thank you, gal

EA ~ Grinning with you...

Sunshine ~ I am honored

Enchanted One ~ How I love your hugs!

Kristabell ~ I believe your first time to reply to one of my offerings.   Thank you!

seraphin ~ Many thanks, indeed!

Midnitesun ~ I am, once again, honored.

Titia ~ It has been soooooooooo long!  Thank you for reading my work one more time

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

divine chaos
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10 posted 2006-08-12 08:04 PM


what a wonderful write!
gotta love those old books
i've fallen asleep like this
soooo many times   
(but I've never described it -quite- like that)
*fans herself*
~*Sheli*~

By words the mind is winged
~Aristophanes~

latearrival
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11 posted 2006-08-14 01:56 PM


A lot of book lovers here. Just the place to post your erotic cover. best to you, martyjo
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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2006-08-14 02:51 PM


Sheli ~
Hope you cooled off a little bit  

martyjo ~
Erotic? Nawwwwwwwwwwwww...


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (08-14-2006 03:30 PM).]

aziza
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13 posted 2006-08-15 02:34 AM


I love this.
You got my senses charged up.
I am ready to touch and smell
taste and ... ummmm... yeah, gotta go.

aziza

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14 posted 2006-08-30 01:05 PM


You're lucky. *G* I always wake up when he lands on my chest or nose! *S* Ah... but then I go back to appreciating his charms. *G*

Enjoyed so much!!!

Lisey
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15 posted 2006-08-30 01:19 PM


so lovely!
FNG
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16 posted 2006-09-01 04:27 AM


At first, i thought it's another love poem for a gal...until the last...

Great metaphor...I like it.

enjoyed.

Wonder where you get this witty idea...lolx

LeeJ
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17 posted 2006-09-01 08:54 AM


this was so real...loved the mystery and the ending...just goes to show ya, we're so at home in the treasures of our stories....

enjoyed

playing.with.crayons
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18 posted 2006-09-01 09:14 AM


my most treasured love indeed...
why, you took the thoughts from my hands and the words from my pen!
Only you managed to phrase it a lot better.
Darn. But not really.
So much Enjoyed!
cheye xx

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