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JosephF
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since 2006-08-30

Posts 30

0 posted 2006-08-30 07:13 PM

What I am…
It’s a tough nut to crack,
Even I struggle to comprehend what I am,
I remain a Mysterious Being
Stuck in a time warp

I enjoy being Mysterious,
Makes me hard to predict,
But so hard to connect with,
I have been locked down for so long,
I don’t know where to begin or end.

I always wish to be a hero,
To go through a Terpsichorean state of events,
To prove to myself that I have a purpose.

Maybe my path is already laid out for me,
And that this is my purpose, to be like a vault,
Enclosed to the world with a blurry view of my way.

Or it could be that this is what I am supposed to do,
A rough sketch or a detailed blue print.

The ending of a poem I usually do is with a precise statement,
Or a feeling or an opinion,
But to this I say,

How can you give up your dreams? It gives you hope, guidance, a feeling of self worth and one hell of a thought for you to live with, all day every day.

So I would say, right here right now, Steal my heart, for I do not care, You are attached to my soul and connected to my thoughts and emotions, my fears and my joys, Never leave me, for I will always be with you, even if you are not always with me.

In a short statement of contradiction, I Love You…
What am I?

I’m in Love…

(This is my first time of this forum, I have been writing poems for a while now as an escape for my emotions. I am a begginer at writing poems really, still a teenager. Well I hope you enjoy it! I have also just noticed the Teen Poetry Section, sorry.)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-08-30 07:33 PM

Welcome to Passions, Joseph. It doesn't matter your age, you are welcome in almost every forum, and even more to come as you spend time with us!

What you are, is a poet. So please, check your Email for a Very Special Greeting!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

2 posted 2006-08-30 07:37 PM

What a passionate post! Yes, for at any age, love can twist you around and around. Welcome to the passions of poetry.

Neotec
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since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

3 posted 2006-08-30 09:28 PM

Good, ( claping hands ) good

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2006-08-30 09:40 PM

really enjoyed your first post!

Welcome to Pip

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2006-08-31 01:57 AM

Impressive .... lets see you again and again!

Welcome to Passions!

Ct

JosephF
Junior Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 30

6 posted 2006-08-31 07:40 AM

Wow thanks guys, i am happy

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-08-31 10:37 AM

Welocme to the Blue pages.
Quite a spashy entrance

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JosephF
Junior Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 30

8 posted 2006-08-31 12:08 PM

Hey i got my Post card, Thank you very much!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

9 posted 2006-08-31 12:56 PM

Welcome, Joseph...seems the poet found a place to be.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

10 posted 2006-09-01 02:36 AM

Welcome, Joseph. I am also a teen here at passions and a wild one at that. its great to hear from somebody new.

Gotta get beck to work,
lots of poems to type so i can post them later on!

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