A delightful rain (completed and revised)

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Open Poetry #38

A delightful rain (completed and revised)

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-08-30 07:41 PM

Pitter Patter
little and lithe.
Heaven bestowed,
an evening gift.

A worn-out day.
Lactic acid build-ups.
O' how much a massage welcomed!

A bejewelled parlour?
Nah, no paid labour.

God's angels giving free massage,
with crystal nails.
Tapping on every nerves,
washes every weary tear.

Cools the stressed-burnt epidermis.
Breaks the toxic piles of acne studs,
filled with worries and yester nudges.

O' what a treat!
I could dance to the raining beat.

A much needed evening rain.
To wash and drain.

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

1 posted 2006-08-30 09:32 PM

Wish i could stand in that rain and wash my lost love away

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-08-30 10:56 PM

"God's angels giving free massage,
with crystal nails."

delightful work too FNG
wish I could just stand in your rain
and get wet...

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

3 posted 2006-08-31 05:33 AM

Thanks all for dropping by

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-08-31 11:03 AM

I like it even more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

5 posted 2006-09-01 03:52 AM

Neotec - A pat on your back

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