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Troy
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since 2006-06-04

Posts 52
B.C.

0 posted 2006-08-27 01:29 AM

White Dwarf Philosophy

When the ripping light
of consciousness warps to power
and cracks the membrane of steeped oblivion,
it thrusts to an endurance as confluent
to its mark as are the systaltic motions
of the heart that beat in the purgatory
of its time-tortured host.

It avows no precinct other than
the orbits of the perennial.
Its unfolding, an endless evolving.
An angel voyeur whose active quest
remains subservient and penultimate
to an awareness never fully rendered
like cascading footfalls in a dream
which overwhelm but never reveal.

Incessant in the flux of time modulation,
it conjugates the intensities of event perception
and enacts the close consummation
of time-autonomous moments.
Time crystals and spires which pass and proclaim
fugues of pantheistic insight.
Thought fugues of single instance
and structure without spaces
in tremors more deep
than life’s remainder.

They are

the Moments without signature,
the Heavy metal implosions of thought,
the White Dwarf Moments.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-08-28 10:19 AM

"it conjugates the intensities of event perception"

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Troy
Member

since 2006-06-04

Posts 52
B.C.

2 posted 2006-08-29 09:58 PM

Thank You!

It;s a wonder I got any responses!

Too coldly abstract...not sentimental enough.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-08-30 07:33 PM

abstract and astoundingly beautiful
dwarfing the mundane moments of day-to-day
glad I did not miss this

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

4 posted 2006-08-30 09:33 PM

nice : )

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2006-08-30 11:01 PM

abstract yes
thought passed hand to hand
of a piece
yes

I enjoyed it

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2006-08-31 01:18 PM

sort of like it's been there all the time, and we knew without knowing?

interesting and brilliant write.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2006-08-31 06:26 PM

Wonderful read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Troy
Member

since 2006-06-04

Posts 52
B.C.

8 posted 2006-09-01 01:38 AM

Thanks All! Comments much appreciated. I know it wasn't an easy read!

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