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HopeS
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0 posted 2006-08-30 07:18 AM



Could I Be Wrong Or Right

Having all the mixed signals
Sent from time to time
The emotionally uncertainty
Showing no clear sign

Then you break your silence
Attempt an explanation
Whilst I guessed in-between
Without communication

Maybe you have your reason
I cannot read your mind
Still the puzzle is incomplete
With pieces hard to find  

My mind criss crosses paths
Which should I choose  
Having searched for answers
Have I missed the clues

Deciphering mixed messages
Could I be wrong or right
Still I continued holding on to
Love I feel when you write

Hope ©2006
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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-08-30 07:19 AM


Beautiful!!
FNG
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2 posted 2006-08-30 08:01 AM


Sometimes pondering too much, that's the problem with me...

You described it well..

hits and misses on some decisions made.

enjoyed  

[This message has been edited by FNG (09-01-2006 04:17 AM).]

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-08-30 11:07 AM


Well writ!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Gaia
4 posted 2006-08-30 12:15 PM


"Having searched for answers
Have I missed the clues"
Perhaps this may be the case. A good write, Hope.

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