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Could I Be Right Or Wrong
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Could I Be Right Or Wrong |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Could I Be Wrong Or Right Having all the mixed signals Sent from time to time The emotionally uncertainty Showing no clear sign Then you break your silence Attempt an explanation Whilst I guessed in-between Without communication Maybe you have your reason I cannot read your mind Still the puzzle is incomplete With pieces hard to find My mind criss crosses paths Which should I choose Having searched for answers Have I missed the clues Deciphering mixed messages Could I be wrong or right Still I continued holding on to Love I feel when you write Hope ©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8358580.html |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful!! |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Sometimes pondering too much, that's the problem with me... You described it well.. hits and misses on some decisions made. enjoyed  [This message has been edited by FNG (09-01-2006 04:17 AM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Having searched for answers Have I missed the clues" Perhaps this may be the case. A good write, Hope. |
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