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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-08-28 11:01 PM





mais
he brought her madelines  
and roman chewing candy  
she sucked  
licked  
stuffed herself  
he laughed
watching her pink tongue
wrap itself on candy
  
now she lies
belly tight as a tick  
head in his deep lap
bare toes
waving  

he touches red lip  
bent to a heart  
long brown finger  
traces cheek to ear  
back to swollen mouth
tiny milk teeth nip  
toes wiggle

screen door open  
breeze lifting bouquet    
herb saint    
mimosa    
swamp water  
lies  

hands touch waist  
tug cotton skimpy
    
where you eating your  
couche-couche tomorrow morning  
she asks  
sucking at praline fingers
lifting

    ah poupée
    where you think
    I’m fixin’ to eat  

wherever wander legs take you  
won’t be here

bugs storm screen
buzzing to get in
lady feels bitten  

around the edges

© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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1 posted 2006-08-28 11:21 PM


This is your realm, and you reign as Queen. Amazing how visual your work is, I am in awe.
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-08-28 11:24 PM



thank you Sandra...
nice thing to say

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-08-28 11:44 PM


:: Looks enviously at the madelines, then peeks at the wandering leg ::

With a combination like that, it all fell into place. You go, girl .. nip with those milk teeth -- he'll bring more sweets when he and that wandering leg come back.

I am way too involved in this Charcoal Man and his Lady.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-28 11:48 PM



oh aziza
so am I
they ride my mind
day and night...
what you reckon
he'll bring next time?


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-08-29 02:28 AM


I think he'll bring her something decadant -- maybe, sweet amaretto ... or dark chocolate filled with a sweet fruit .. or maybe  ... drifts off thinking of your question ... maybe he'll bring her a bright bauble ... or spicy perfume ... smiles and goes ...
Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-08-29 08:10 AM


lady one..they say skeeter spray is an aphrodisiac..if one spaanks it on..makes it sting just a bit..

enjoyed this as usual ms, bring her back soon?

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-08-29 08:14 AM


*clapping wildly*  Love this!!  More.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2006-08-29 09:17 AM



Yes, bring her back soon.


Interloper
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2006-08-29 11:27 AM


BRAVA!
More!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
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10 posted 2006-08-29 01:07 PM


whoa


magnificantly written

loved this

The Lady
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11 posted 2006-08-29 11:06 PM




bright bauble aziza
hmmmm… could happen...

skeeter spray Stranger!
you… you … demon
well wait…
do you think
the lady would like it?

thank you
Gentle Spirit…
I don’t think their story
is over yet

thank you Karilea

Interloper,
thank you
stayed tuned…

thank you LeeJ  



Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
12 posted 2011-03-27 12:53 PM


I bet she would have loved Opium perfume.

A

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