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lady waking (charcoal man and his lady)
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lady waking (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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sun nudges eyes lady yawns stretches smiles a memory sweet food sweet man searches sheets with toes une attrappe de poule gone tiptoes with morning sun room to room sound of gone where his Panama hung empty nail charcoal man drinking café au lait from another cup eating sugar from another bowl not one crumb left for the lady only enough madelines for one night lady pleure |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Elle ne doit pas pleurer ! Il est un homme, et est pour toujours seulement tant que son attention est distraite. He will be back, won't he Lady! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady...I've done that reach with the toe...such details make for great writing!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah yes, Sandra that's the way men are attentions as long as well... you know yes, I'm afraid he'll be back |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Martie there are probably a lot of toe searchers here... sigh lonely feeling |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
He should watch where he gets his sugar from ... might get that social disease, the sweet tooth. Yep. aziza |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
got me laughing aziza... I think he's already got it that was good |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: just mutters about dippin' his fingers in other's sugar bowls :: |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
laughing loud now... remind you of someone does he?  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Laughs :: Do I get to plead the 5th? Let's just say ... He was sucking sugar ... and ... well, you know the rest of the story. :: laughs :: So ... I love this Charcoal Man cause He appeals to me -- but, he ain't drinkin' café au lait out of my teacup. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
um hum aziza well known story... keep an eye on your cups he's pretty sneaky laughing! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, details... empty nail... little images like that make for some fine vignettes... and give an endearing quality to the loving rogue...  well done. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love the way you bring him back to us, more, more please. The lady, is so very blessed! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one...pssst he always takes his cohiba's on the veranda... |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
You have made this man sound so adorably cute....  I almost fell in love lol |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How I look forward to these treasures Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Karilea empty nails are the hallmark of this rogue Gentle Spirit thank you so much Stranger hes’ takin’ his cohiba on some other veranda... this morning the rogue… no no FNG! don’t fall in love with him well maybe just a little why thank you Interloper |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Okay, I am older and wiser. Maybe he can drink café au lait from my cup. Once. Or twice. A |
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