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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-08-27 11:05 PM



        ah bébé
        you know your man
        loves you

lady passes him pair of eyes
boude'
tired of shoofly ways

        ah bébé
        tooloulou

can’t get him out of her eyes
crave tendrils
reach for his wrists
his cigar smoke mouth

        beb
        river don care
        'bout we make roux

lady’s mouth makes red o
eyes hold his
fingers scratch dark loam
on her way to
lost again


© Copyright 2006 Kate - All Rights Reserved
seraphin
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1 posted 2006-08-27 11:44 PM


Is it too much to ask that you hurry on the next installment?
The Lady
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2 posted 2006-08-27 11:51 PM




laughing
the next installment is ready
Sandra...


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
3 posted 2006-08-28 12:09 PM


:: Just whispers .. look away!  look away!  Do NOT look into his eyes! ---- ooooh, too late.  Maybe next time (but don't look in his eyes). ::

Oh man - I have so been down this road.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-28 12:12 PM




aziza
we are sisters of the heart...
you, me and the lady
I want to tell her
not to look too...
poor thing


aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-08-28 01:23 AM


It's like being a 'push me - pull me' -- and whisper ... Look!  Don't Look!  Look!  Noooooooooo ... laughs.
The Lady
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6 posted 2006-08-28 01:26 AM



making me laugh
aziza...
that's exactly what it's like


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2006-08-28 06:20 AM



Your vignettes are magical, Lady...
and the naughty is delicious...


Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-08-28 07:28 AM


Oh this lands so softly just right this morning, yessss I know this type of don't look....

niiicccceee lady.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-08-28 07:48 AM


lady one..go ahead and look...he would be wearing raybanz anyway...the mirror kind...so she could see her own reflection, doing her smile miles..enjoyed it ms
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2006-08-28 12:44 PM


I
LOVE
IT!

More!
and MORE!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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11 posted 2006-08-28 02:40 PM


Lady....You charm with such sensual earthiness...it pleases me much to read.
The Lady
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12 posted 2006-08-28 10:42 PM





ah, Karilea  
the naughty drives me to write them
thank you…

Gentle Spirit
you know that
type of don't look
too…
another sister
thank you

Stranger
you are incorrigible
but nice…
thank you

I thank you
Interloper
yes, more…

it pleases me that
you read
Martie…
thank you


Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
13 posted 2011-03-27 12:51 PM


I told here not to look.  But, did she listen?  Nope.  She did not.

A

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