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about eyes (charcoal man and his lady) |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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ah bébé you know your man loves you lady passes him pair of eyes boude' tired of shoofly ways ah bébé tooloulou can’t get him out of her eyes crave tendrils reach for his wrists his cigar smoke mouth beb river don care 'bout we make roux lady’s mouth makes red o eyes hold his fingers scratch dark loam on her way to lost again |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Is it too much to ask that you hurry on the next installment? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
laughing the next installment is ready Sandra... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
:: Just whispers .. look away! look away! Do NOT look into his eyes! ---- ooooh, too late. Maybe next time (but don't look in his eyes). :: Oh man - I have so been down this road. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
aziza we are sisters of the heart... you, me and the lady I want to tell her not to look too... poor thing |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It's like being a 'push me - pull me' -- and whisper ... Look! Don't Look! Look! Noooooooooo ... laughs. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
making me laugh aziza... that's exactly what it's like |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your vignettes are magical, Lady... and the naughty is delicious... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh this lands so softly just right this morning, yessss I know this type of don't look.... niiicccceee lady. seek the flame within yourself |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one..go ahead and look...he would be wearing raybanz anyway...the mirror kind...so she could see her own reflection, doing her smile miles..enjoyed it ms |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I LOVE IT! More! and MORE! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady....You charm with such sensual earthiness...it pleases me much to read. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah, Karilea the naughty drives me to write them thank you… Gentle Spirit you know that type of don't look too… another sister thank you Stranger you are incorrigible but nice… thank you I thank you Interloper yes, more… it pleases me that you read Martie… thank you |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I told here not to look. But, did she listen? Nope. She did not. A |
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