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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-08-28 11:11 AM

we were merrygorounds
in syrup slow dancing
but we pushed harder
and made our legs sore

I worshiped at your laughter
when you cried sometimes
those concussions were lovely
when you made them louder

then my whispers dared be
and played them back over
a dozen times again
seeming perfectly insatiable

and perhaps willing to allow
me to kill myself trying
to undo another pearl button
of your improper attention

with the penned wings of butterflies

______________

daark

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-08-28 11:37 AM

grinz...insatiable, yep. Love the images in this Daark one. Oh, you do stir the mind, nice and slow....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-08-28 11:41 AM

ms gs, thanks for the slip by ms..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-08-28 01:35 PM

insatiable slips...

well done, Sir. An afternoon delightful...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-08-28 01:48 PM

DarkDarkDark~

'we were merrygorounds
in syrup slow dancing'

I simply *sigh* with the realize
that your playground would make merry
(any day of the week)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2006-08-28 02:22 PM

ms sun...always a pleasure to sip your replies, thanks ms

___________

lady marge, you make me wish for 5 fridays a week, thanks little friend

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-08-28 02:33 PM

DS

"with the penned wings of butterflies"

You make it sound so simple.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2006-08-28 02:44 PM

ms martie, yes lil neighbor..it is just a step..over the line, thanks hon

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

8 posted 2006-08-28 10:07 PM

"and perhaps willing to allow
me to kill myself trying
to undo another pearl button
of your improper attention"

I say
go for it Stranger...
may be worth dying

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2006-08-29 08:12 AM

lady one, slow deaths are lovely
when you can count the edges of seconds
thanks ms

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2006-08-29 06:34 PM

always a pleasure to read you, dark one

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

11 posted 2006-08-29 07:41 PM

Absolutely tongue-tied. Then again, in some instances....

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2006-08-30 07:43 AM

ms G thanks lady friend

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ms sandra, they say candy canes will straighten a tied tongue? thanks lady

aziza
Member Elite

since 2006-07-09

Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

13 posted 2006-08-30 11:16 AM

You know, it's like I sail on your words.

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