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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
Hey I'm new i just love to write!!,i posted a comment with one of my poems just now but i cant find it,so im posting it on my own thread hope you like it!. The Fella In The Empty Chair an empty playground with a swinging swing telephone going with an endless ring a bottle of milk still full yet so old cheese in the fridge covered in mould tv still playing video still running the air so musky the smell vile an old men gone and hes been there awhile no family calling "Dad are you ok!?" terrible to see someone dying this way He's only been gone a few days thats all!?!? sitting in the chair looking so small just think of other people in a situation like his think of that person that noone would miss then one day the old fella will know that you'll come knocking when its time for him to go! written by lisey |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lisey~ WELCOME to the PiP pages blue~ Enjoyed your poetry~ I saw your post on this link - /pip/Forum95/HTML/002952.html#5 That's okay ... you'll get the hang of it all~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
Awwww thanks!! its different to the forums im used to.....but you guys seem like a good bunch and im up for some constructive crit's!! so fanks for the lovely welcome x |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
welcome lisey I enjoyed this poem look forward to more... |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
Hey ty !! i'l look forward to reading everyones poetry theres so much to get thru but thier really awe inspiring!! |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
"He's only been gone a few days thats all!?!? " This touched a very personal chord for me. Replace a few days with a year, and the feeling you captured so well still applies. Welcome to our home. I look forward to reading more of your work. Sandra |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
ty!...some of my poems may not be appropriate for this website tho!? i dont want to get kicked off,as its the first forum ive found,thats caught my attendtion! |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
y ty, id love to post some more of my poetry on here its just that im not sure if its suitable and some are dark...not majorly dark but i dont want to risk getting kicked of the forum!!! |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
oops didnt think my first post went *Blushes* lol |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lisey, we've many rooms for all sorts of poetry. I'm sure you'll fit in just about anywhere. If in doubt of your poem's content, just ask a Moderator. We're here to help you out. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a very special greeting... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Welcome. I am kind of new too and I think you started off with a bang! What a moving poem. aziza |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
Awwww fanks for the email it was lovely!!!  i feel so special! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages. You will like it here Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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