Open Poetry #38 |
sipping Java |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Java jumps into my brainwaves shakes me loose from this chair leaves me dangling in midair and the cries are so loud, so very loud they pain my ears bring me to tears knowing anguish and suffering wails itself in surround sound and all I can do is keep my own feet on steady ground and breathe the notes I am so sorry I am so sorry |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kacy, maybe I am just too old to understand what you have going on in this poem...Is is about coffee and running out of it, or something like that....forgive my stupidity. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nooo 'tis about Indonesia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The earthquake..yes, now it all makes perfect sense to me. thanx!! My mind has been off on other tangents lately. That is truly a tragedy. We must count our blessings. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is good! I will save it to my computer! And thank you for all your comments! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"and breathe the notes I am so sorry I am so sorry" wonderful work Kacy thank you |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Brenda Lee sang "'m sorry, so sorry Please accept my apology..." Ineresting write Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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