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aziza
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0 posted 2006-08-27 02:14 AM


Peace

Under northern skies among icy mountains so tall
an unearthly silence reigns supreme
Shimmering lights that fill the black of night
seem to allow us all to touch our dreams

Here there is no war, no blood, no death
only the snow's virginal purity in the cold
Fingers can deftly pluck the stars from the sky
but only if the one plucking is fearlessly bold

This is not a place for the weary or soft
It is hard to exist among the freezing clouds
When darkness covers the winter sun
black and cold falls like a curtaining shroud

Watch the miraculous gift as it begins to unfold
Icy flakes fall and stars hang like glass balls
As the northern lights begin their eerie dance
Yet, in the blackness, time seems to abruptly stall

That is the bonus that few get to see
It could be proof of a Higher Power
but your eyes have to be open to take it all in
as the heavens open like petals of a wondrous flower

May you know peace in the land where you live
May you touch dreams and see the beauty of the night
May you reach out to others and offer them love
while keeping what is dear safe within your sights

aziza

[This message has been edited by aziza (08-28-2006 02:33 AM).]

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Balladeer
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1 posted 2006-08-27 11:36 PM


Wise words, aziza. There are many beautiful and peaceful places on Earth, from the high mountain regions to the tropical rain forests, where war does not command newspaper front pages and people live their lives in relative peace and tranquility.

May all nations achieve that one day........

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-08-27 11:42 PM




beautiful poem aziza

"May you know peace in the land where you live
May you touch dreams and see the beauty of the night
May you reach out to others and offer them love
while keeping what is dear safe within your sights"

touches me...


seraphin
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3 posted 2006-08-27 11:55 PM


Alison, you are a wonder, with wonderful talent.
aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2006-08-28 02:38 AM


Thank you all.  I had to come in and fix it.  It was bugging me lots.

I do appreciate your words of kindness.

aziza

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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5 posted 2006-08-28 05:54 AM


Beautiful !!!!    I have become such a fan !
Thank you so much for sharing your amazing talent.

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
6 posted 2006-08-28 08:10 AM


ms az, you take my eyes
to only you know places

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
7 posted 2006-08-28 10:52 AM


:: smiles ::

Thank you.  
What a way to start a morning!!!

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