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shawn105
New Member

since 2006-08-25

Posts 3

0 posted 2006-08-25 04:07 PM

THAT WOULD BE THE DAY

And I'll call off my flight
to touch you.
I miss the feeling
of your soft skin,
that voice that soothes
my mind.

I want to catch one more glimpse
of you
before you leave me tonight.

So let's hold hands
one more time
in the grassy field
in our bare feet,
below the thick mist
under the warmth of the
rising sun.

Let's have our picnic together
inside the heart that you
carved with your finger
in the sand.

Let's play around in the ocean,
splash each other's faces
playfully,
in our bathing suits.

Let's lie down on a hill
side-by-side,
with our hair in the grass,
and stare at the clouds,
which love to create shapes
to gawk at,
for us.

Let's dance in the rain
as it soaks your hair,
under the darkening clouds
until lightening strikes,
and the thunder scares us off.

When the storming has stopped,
let's go outside,
take a stroll in the park,
stop for a minute and rest
on a bench
lighted by a lamp post,
and smile at each other
while scanning each other's eyes.

God you're so cute right now.
You take my breath away,
literally.

I'll walk you home
to your doorstep,
give you a bear hug,
and kiss you goodnight,
softly,
on your lips.

Where are you?
I'm searching,
pacing the airport.
Look at me.
I must be a wreck
right now.

Where'd you go?
Did you not stay?
Did you leave without
waiting
for me?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2006-08-25 04:15 PM

Welcome

Ahhha I liked this very very much!

"Let's have our picnic together
inside the heart that you
carved with your finger
in the sand. "

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Let's dance in the rain
as it soaks your hair,
under the darkening clouds
until lightening strikes,
and the thunder scares us off."

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-08-25 04:32 PM

Welcome to the blue pages.
You will enjoy it here

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

shawn105
New Member

since 2006-08-25

Posts 3

3 posted 2006-08-25 04:34 PM

Thanks for the warm welcomes.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-08-26 12:09 PM

welcome Shawn

"Let's have our picnic together
inside the heart that you
carved with your finger
in the sand."

really good...

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-08-26 10:07 AM

Let's have our picnic together
inside the heart that you
carved with your finger
in the sand.

~*~

Apparently, the imagery of this
snuck out to a few of us, and
is one of the better phrases
in all of your wonderful poem.

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2006-08-26 11:03 AM

Shawn~
Welcome to PiP~

I enjoyed the imagery you drew in the sand~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-08-28 10:26 AM

I think this belongs on top for another view by our poets

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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