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shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-08-23 12:13 PM

I was born
with eyelids sealed
as if I was meant
to look within,
but a surgeon
with a fine blade
made me view the world
through open wounds.

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froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

1 posted 2006-08-23 08:10 AM

Good morning Anthony
Wonderful read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-08-23 08:43 AM

wonderful!!!!!

Morning

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2006-08-23 10:36 AM

Interesting write

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

4 posted 2006-08-23 10:57 AM

Powerfully raw images channeling here...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-08-23 11:19 AM

Well, now you've got me wondering how
many of us didn't have such a kind
physician in our earlier days...

Well done, Sir.

hex
Junior Member

since 2006-08-23

Posts 33

6 posted 2006-08-23 11:32 AM

This poem is well done indeed, sir. I love it!

Abide with me fast falls the eventide.
Henry F. Lyte

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

7 posted 2006-08-23 11:34 AM

ah yes...life hurts...makes it hard to not ask why... que no?
powerful write

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2006-08-23 02:28 PM

A thoughtful poem, and a wondering if that surgeon knew that there was more to learn.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2006-08-24 09:09 AM

Gosh! That was fantastic!!! Your words really made me sit up and take notice! Clever write!

EA

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2006-08-24 11:26 AM

Anthony~
First I got a tickle out of seeing -
[I was born] shirtless~

Then your thoughts pulled me into the depths of this piece~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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