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aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

0 posted 2006-08-20 11:44 PM


The crickets are driving me crazy
They are making their noises so loud
The wooly worms are wearing their woolens
And showing them off to the crowd
The snow geese are gathering snowflakes
Preparing to cover the ground all in white
The robins are eating chokecherry berries
They are weaving a bit drunkenly in flight
The squirrels are running and hiding
All the cones and nuts that they find
And I am stacking my firewood high
Winter’s taking up space in my mind.
The moose are moving about slowly
Their eyes out for hunters with guns
The voles are darting about quickly
They grab some more dog food and run.
The cranes have landed in the field out of town
They are resting before they leave ‘til the spring
The geese have joined them and are waiting
Soon they’ll form in a V and off again they will wing.
Winter is coming the trees seem to say
As their leaves float on their way to the ground
There’s a nip in the air in the mornings
The rivers flow more slowly towards the Sound
If you happen to live in a climate of cold
Summer is beginning to relax and to wane
It’s going to be white soon and frosty with ice
The beauty of each season is never the same.

aziza

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-08-22 01:34 AM




oh Alison!

what a beautiful picture!

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-08-22 05:56 AM


I am delighted that you liked it.

Thank you.

the grey
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since 2006-01-06
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Queensland, Australia.
3 posted 2006-08-23 03:58 AM


G'day Alison.  We don't have such drastic winters here in Queensland, but you certainly paint a great picture and love the tinge of humour as well.  Goodonya mate.


Bush Poet

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2006-08-23 07:44 AM


how lovely
reminding me fondly of what is to come
yet knowing not of it's color
or the images yet to dream

this had me toe tapping


aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
5 posted 2006-08-23 11:16 AM


Thank you ... glad that you both enjoyed it and saw the humor.  I love winter so much!
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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Ohio
6 posted 2006-08-23 04:30 PM


The leaves are starting to fall here in Ohio.
The Crickets are singing their song.
The mornings have a slight chill and mist covers my car.
Yes winter is on the way.
Pretty picture you have painted with your words.
Hugs
BonBon

Pilgrimage
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Texas, USA
7 posted 2006-08-24 12:08 PM


What a wonderful picture you paint here, all the activity leaves me breathless.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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