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Remind me |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Remind me to breathe, My leaded heart to beat. why has things turned so heavy. When i haven't turned fifty? I have so much inside, Can't get it out right. Language can't express, What im experiencing. Is it sadness? It isn't happiness, for sure. I can't brawl, as i hope i would. But i won't, just won't. Remind me to breathe, My leaded heart to beat. why has things turned so heavy. When i haven't turned fifty? [This message has been edited by FNG (08-22-2006 01:12 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
FNG~ Take a poetic walk in the park stringing along with a kite Let your worries be lifted all things will come right~ Ease into the breeze with thoughts on the sway This will turn out to be a most remarkable day~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Believe me, "heavy" can come at any age but how long it hangs around I guess is up to ask. Walk it out or write it out but ... hey! - let it out!  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"why" a VERY big question! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Hi, honeybunch - thanks for your comforting words Marge - your poem lift me up instantly Thanks for the sweet thought.How wonderful if my thoughts can lift like the kite.... interloper - thanks for dropping by |
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