Open Poetry #38 |
Strange |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Strange Strange is odd and so am I bizarre, no question outlandish, no lie eccentric in mind, I wish to evolve; weird is contempt; this my resolve; extraordinary is a word perhaps to my favor peculiar is one that perhaps needs a savior curious this mind when all need but glance; and queer is my liking when given the chance; perplexed can be this given of sum and foreign a concept; yet you’ve been given none; alien are views which cannot think free; and exotic are whims which cannot just let be novel are approaches when given a word like “strange” in a title; why, This “it” can be absurd. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
one poem in a million, or just words expressed beautifully - the art of pip no doubt a poet who cares |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
That's off the wall! You're just beautifully unique. Rae |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Karilea, You've expanded on "Strange" so very well here and I really enjoyed it that you integrated rhyme here. Well done. -Bob |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Contemplatively unique! Now I wonder what was the catalyst for this piece... By the way, you poem to Elizabeth Santo was exquisite and lovely. ~Klassy |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...Of course...only a few of the reasons that I love you!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You continue to stretch the envelope called Karilea. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
strange is nice....enjoyed you here ms |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
good job |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
strangely wonderful I love what you do with words Karilea |
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