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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-19 01:53 AM


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“The Man in the Box”

19 August 2006


Someone stole my brother.
Mr Cancer put him in the ground.
And every year age grows older,
yet of his gentle voice there was no sound!

Someone took that love,
that lasts anyway.
Because no one can take
those memories, as they fade.

So what was this,
the day he last did smile.
An image upon a mind,
just not seen now for a while.

“The man in the box”,
his childhood nephew said.
That man of forgiving and love,
a man who will always live,
because he was in heaven above


“So shall my righteousness answer for me in time to come,
when it shall come for my hire before thy face: every one
that is not speckled and spotted among the goats, and brown
among the sheep, that shall be counted stolen with me.”
Genesis 30: 33 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

a poet who cares

© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2006-08-19 11:15 AM


I'm sorry about your brother.  He will have his own immortality with your poetry.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2006-08-19 01:03 PM


Sigh. What a strong and lasting analogy...


...but,

in a box no longer.


-Bob

sandgrain
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3 posted 2006-08-19 07:06 PM


How true that when they're gone our love for them lives on as do the fond memories.

    Rae

miscellanea
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4 posted 2006-08-19 08:51 PM


poettothecars,

a very, very special poem...  I'd like to keep this, if I may.

miscellanea

poettothecars
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5 posted 2006-08-19 09:00 PM


My brother might have died in April 1998, but the memory is all I have now to hold on too

And if it is in the forum, you can keep the poem, only remember who wrote it

a poet who cares

perfect stranger
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6 posted 2006-08-20 01:38 PM


what a sad poem brought a tear to my eyes you must have been very close to your brother to write such a heart feltpoem.


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